对于备考过雅思的小伙伴而言，想必都清楚雅思写作提分有多难。不少“烤鸭”在备考雅思写作时，常常投入了100%的精力，可收获的回报却不足10%。那么，若想提高雅思写作分数，究竟需要注意些什么呢？

雅思官方写作评分标准

Task Achievement (TA) / Task Response (TR)-任务完成情况（Task 1）/任务回答情况（Task 2）；

Coherence and Cohesion (CC)-连贯与衔接；

Lexical Resource (LR)-词汇丰富度；

Grammatical Range and Accuracy (GRA)-语法多样性和准确性。

那么，了解了雅思写作评分标准之后，就可以对症下药。今天，Eric老师重点带大家了解其中一项评分标准—Task Response (TR)：任务回答情况（Task 2）。

什么是TR?

在AC和GT写作考试的任务2中，考生需要针对给定的问题或陈述提示，提出并展开自己的立场，字数不少于250词。观点需有证据支持，例子可来自考生自身经历。

① whether a (clear and fully developed) position is presented：全文是否有个人立场的清晰呈现；

② whether ideas are relevant, (fully) extended and (well) supported：是否出现了切题的观点并有效论证；

③ whether repetitions, lapses, or omissions occur：是否出现重复、疏漏或内容缺失。

回应充分度

在雅思写作评分标准中，任务回应（Task Response, TR）的“回应充分度”主要体现在不同分数段的主体段呈现方式上。

题目：

Some people argue that traditional newspapers are no longer necessary in the digital age, as people can  access news more conveniently through other  media.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

译文：有些人认为，在数字时代，传统报纸不再是必要的，因为人们可以通过其他媒体更方便地获取新闻，你在多大程度上同意或不同意？

一起来看看对于上面这道题目，不同分数段学员该如何回答？

01

Version 1：(5-6分数段) 

Argument-论证：Opponents points out that readers, listeners and audiences also need to take flexibility into consideration.

Reason1：They suggest that the information provided by the alternatives to newspapers can be consumed more conveniently. 

Reason2：Newspapers, on the other hand,generally provide less convenience. 

02

Version 2：(6-7分数段) 

Argument-论证：Opponents points out that readers, listeners and audiences also need to take flexibility into consideration.

Reason1：They suggest that the information provided by the alternatives to newspapers can be consumed more conveniently. 

Example 1：A housewife or a lorry driver, for instance, can hear about what has happened recently through a radio news programmes whilst doing household takes or driving their truck on a motorway. 

03

Version 3：(7-8分数段)

Argument-论证：Opponents points out that readers,listeners and audiences also need to take flexibility into consideration.

Reason1：They suggest that the information provided by the alternatives to newspapers can be consumed more conveniently.

Example 1：A housewife or a lorry driver, for instance, can hear about what has happened recently through a radio news programmes whilst doing  household takes or driving their truck on a motorway.

Example 1'：A commuter who has long trip to  work may read a report with texts and coloured pictures, or watch a news video clip when travelling to work.

Reason 2：Newspapers, on the other hand, generally provide less convenience.

04

Version 4：（8分及以上）

Argument-论证：Opponents points out that readers, listeners and audiences also need to take flexibility into consideration.

Reason1：They suggest that the information provided by the alternatives to newspapers can be consumed more conveniently. 

Example 1：A housewife or a lorry driver, for instance, can hear about what has happened recently  through a radio news programmes whilst doing household takes or driving their truck on a motorway.

Example 1'： A commuter who has long trip to  work may read a report with texts and coloured pictures, or watch a news video clip when travelling to  work.

Reason 2：Newspapers, on the other hand, generally provide less convenience.

Example 2：lt is true that readers can simply glance at the titles and substitutes while walking, but  to efficiently understand current affairs,they have to concentrate on the texts, which can be difficult for  those who often have to multitask and commute.

回应关键词的重要性

在雅思写作中，回应关键词（Addressing Keywords）是任务回应（Task Response, TR）的核心评分标准之一。题目中的关键词决定了写作的方向和重点，是否准确识别并贯穿全文直接影响分数（尤其是Band 6+的差异）。

题目以及解析：

Governments should invest in public healthcare rather than arts  programs, as healthcare directly impacts citizens' well-being. To what extent do you agree  or disagree?

译文：政府应该投资公共医疗而不是艺术项目，因为医疗直接影响公民的福祉。你在多大程度上同意或不同意？

关键词圈画：

显而易见：

public healthcare（公共医疗）

arts program（艺术项目）

citizens' well-being（公民福祉）

存在但容易被忽略：

invest（投资）

directly impacts（直接影响）

01

段落A（回应全部关键词）

While healthcare undeniably directly impacts physical survival, the claim to prioritise its funding neglects the indirect role of arts in well-being. Norway's 2022 policy allocating 15% of health budgets to community theatre reduced dementia patients' medication use by 22% (Oslo University  study), proving arts can indirectly alleviate healthcare burdens. Moreover, the verb invest implies  long-term returns: Melbourne's public art installations increased local business revenue by 18%, expanding tax bases for future medical facilities. Thus, narrowly defining impact as direct physical intervention ignores systemic welfare linkages.

TR 纬度点评：

充分回应题目各部分，用“挪威资金分配”、“墨尔本税收增长”论证“投资回报”(invest)，对比医疗的“直接影响”与艺术的“间接作用”(directly impacts)。批判题目中 directly 的狭义定义，提出系统性福利观。

02

段落B（只回应明显关键词）

Healthcare is more important than arts. If people  get sick, they need hospitals, not paintings. For example, during COVID, governments built more lCUs  to save lives. Art is just for entertainment and does  not help survival. Therefore, money should go to  healthcare.

TR 纬度点评：

做到了基本回应，但仅仅提出“建ICU”的一次性支出（未分析invest的长期性)，默认医疗-直接，艺术=无关（未反驳/支持directly impacts的假设)。错误简化“福祉-生理生存”，未比较资金投入回报率差异。

全文总结

回应结构

回应内容：关键词选取

圈画关键所有词：重要名词+修饰词/限定词+连接词

自查：“如果忽略这个词语，我的论点会失焦吗?”

想要写作拿高分，不是靠堆砌高级词汇，而是要精准回应任务，并且逻辑清晰地展开论述。掌握正确方法，写作7分轻松到手！